My Elaborated Sentence
November7
Boring: The fish swam.
Good : The pretty rainbow fish swam calmly in the sparkling blue ocean.
Boring: The fish swam.
Good : The pretty rainbow fish swam calmly in the sparkling blue ocean.
Boring Sentence: The girl planted flowers.
My new sentence: The girl carefully planted pretty pink flowers in her garden at her granny’s house.
Welcome to my brand new blog. ore.
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