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My Elaborated Sentence

November7

Boring: The fish swam.

 

Good : The pretty rainbow fish swam calmly in the sparkling  blue ocean.

My Elaborated Sentences

November4

Boring Sentence: The girl planted flowers.

My new sentence: The girl carefully planted pretty pink flowers in her garden at her granny’s house.

Hello world!

August5

Welcome to my brand new blog. ore.

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